Wednesday, April 13, 2011

Haircessorize Audacity

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6 comments:

  1. SelenaviApril 13, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    I like the sound effects, it very fix with the topic. Your commercial deliver the message of hair extension in a very creative way. The voices are clear, and easy to understand.

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  2. ThanhApril 13, 2011 at 6:18 PM

    I think your podcast is very good. I really like it. The transitions good, good sound effects and song choices because it really consistent. Its' good when you base on the story of Rapunzel. Clear ideals it make easier for people to understand it. You didn’t make any mistake in grammar. At the end you introduced too fast and I can’t hear anything. Narrations and conversations flew well. The volumes of the music not too loud, so I can hear what are you talking about. You measured the time very good not longer than the condition. You did very well on this, the only one u should improve is at the end speak lower.

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  3. UnknownApril 16, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Content: You have created a very CREATIVE commercial, and I guess you must have worked hard on planning the script and the running order. Yours shows great originality, and in a way it sounds very cute, which makes a good hook right from the beginning <3 However, it took me several times to actually understand the whole thing because the voice levels are not at the same. At some points, it sounds sort of noisy and unclear. Yet overall, you stick to the topic.
    Delivery:AWESOME. As I said, it's a very creative and cute commercial and there's a hook right from the beginning. Good connection to Tangled - and the use of Hair Accessorize. Overall the grammar is perfect, yet the enunciation requires more effort to show better emotions. Good job though!
    Music:Your music choices are perfect - magical in the beginning, funny and cute-ish during the whole thing, and by the end it rushes a bit more - sticking well to the content, and well - they're excellent!
    Technical Production: Yours is a good length for a commercial, and it keeps the audience on track. You should improve more on the transitions and the sound levels to make your production more productive.
    Overall it's an incredible commercial! I just love it <3

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  4. Sarryna HoangApril 17, 2011 at 2:14 PM

    I like the sound effect and it's very creative. Your podcast is very good but the lastpart, I think it's not clear much. Sr cause I cant hear it. Its' good when you base on the story of Rapunzel. Narrations and conversations flew well. The sound effects are very symmetrical. You measured the time very good not longer than the condition. You should put more efforts into it then you will have a PERFECT one. I think you need to do the evaluation thing. :]

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  5. susandongApril 18, 2011 at 4:15 AM

    @selenavi-Thanh-Liz's-english8-Sarryna Hoang: thanks guys

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  6. minami.murataApril 25, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    OMG!!! it is really awesome... I love it and you make by yourself ....it is amazing for see it. I love your drawing. and think it that picture about that...

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